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Sep 15Liked by Mary Carroll Moore

Love these ideas Mary. For me I have had "shoulds" all my life. Now in my later writing time, I write what I am truly thinking, feeling, unfiltered. I may not share everything publically, but it helps me go to the edges where I have not visited in a while. Right after I write, I think that my writing is trash but after the second read, I accept it. My technique is the second read.

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Yes!! That’s excellent.

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Sep 13Liked by Mary Carroll Moore

This was an interesting exercise. I loved the part about reading backwards. I think I love suspense too much. But I get what you are saying. Thanks for sharing.

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I love the reading backwards technique too. Thanks for commenting, Bee!

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You’re welcome!

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Sep 13Liked by Mary Carroll Moore

Another gift of a post from you! Having a bit of trouble visualizing the mosaic technique…. would you mind showing what this technique would look like on the page?

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Ah, I wish I could, Elsa. Substack doesn't have the ability to insert images in the comments. But you could visualize a spread of cards on a table, each card containing one word or phrase, as in my example, from a list you've already made. Then you scan the cards (words) to see what pops out. And consider the words in cards adjacent. It's quite intuitive, I've found. Kind of a mind leap when I realize the associated words create a new meaning.

Maybe that helps a little?

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yes thanks!

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Sep 13Liked by Mary Carroll Moore

Mary, I’m new here. Thank you for this insightful piece. It contributes to me and will impact my writing starting 30 minutes from now. :).

I especially appreciated the meander and mosaic:

“A new scene emerged that defined the difficult relationship between the protagonist, Molly, and her talented, distant father.”

🙏

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Thanks, James. So glad it was helpful. I love these techniques.

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