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Power Positions--How to Increase the Tension in Characters and Locations

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Mary Carroll Moore
Apr 09, 2021
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"Who's on first?"

We're not talking baseball. We're asking: Who is the power person in a particular scene? Who is the character that holds the control over present and future outcomes? Who will most easily score the home run?

Once I identify that player, I can begin to work the elements of tension in my fiction and memoir more skillfully.

To create tensi…

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