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Does Your Writing Show or Tell? Learn from Robert Olen Butler

Does Your Writing Show or Tell? Learn from Robert Olen Butler

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Mary Carroll Moore
Oct 21, 2008
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Anton Chekhov wrote, “Don’t tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.”

Showing is a demonstration of emotion through specific details. Telling can bring in an almost intellectual assessment of what happened. Showing, the opposite, requires very little intellectual language. It relies instead on sensory detail (smells, sigh…

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