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Creating Pause in Your Action--When and How to Let the Reader Linger without Losing Momentum

Creating Pause in Your Action--When and How to Let the Reader Linger without Losing Momentum

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Mar 02, 2018
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A blog reader sent in this fascinating question:

How can "event writers" develop stationary moments in their narrative and sections in their books where the main characters reflect on the meaning of what happens?  What's the purpose of this, and what's is benefit to the story?

This is a question about pacing, but it also hints at our natural preferences …

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